- Have the hand stuck out of a pile of leaves.
- Dutch angle on hand coming out of ground, creates tension.
- The narrative was a little vague, confused about whether the arm was alive or dead.
- Better title needed.
- More research put in to creative narrative.
Thursday, 1 October 2009
how could we enhance our short video?
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